shanti

06 Aug 2006 269 views
 
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Hardbrücke

there's a certain beauty in industrial scenes...

Hardbrücke

there's a certain beauty in industrial scenes...

comments (8)

the geometric angles and shapes in this shot are not to be believed. i absolutely love the angle, as it allows you to capture the details of the windows, roof and tracks. one suggestion would be to decrease the brightness of this shot b/c it looks a little washed out.
Shanti: Thanks Nicole. I also thought it might be a bit too light, but then I did like the pastel colors (it was a kind of cloudy pale day). Until I get a decent monitor, I'm not seeing the colors and light accurately. Also, since the details of bricks, stones, etc can still be seen, I guessed it wasn't really that "washed out". But I will try it a bit darker and see. Thanks!
Your right, there is...like the yellow on the roof, and the red door and windows..well done..
Shanti: Those are the pastels I like in this...
  • Alida
  • United States
  • 6 Aug 2006, 22:55
It reminds me of something sad. or dangerous but I can't pinpoint why. teh colours are awesom.
Shanti: I like when a photo triggers the unconcious. I also feel something like you describe when I look at this... thanks for pointing it out, Alida.
  • den
  • United States
  • 7 Aug 2006, 21:48
hey ya think maybe someday real soon we could go takem sum reel gud pitures.heh heh..lol Why the sad face? allcolades will be briming when you return as.. this is a photo op paridise
Shanti: be here now, dear den...
  • BeakerSt
  • Shutterchance
  • 7 Aug 2006, 23:36
I like the composition although I feel you could have cropped out the top edge of greenery as it is very slightly distracting. The colour combinations and patterns and textures are very appealing. Good stuff.
Shanti: Thanks for your comment... I agree re the crop, and did want to remove the greenery at top, but didn't want to lose too many of the roof windows. Could come down a bit, though, so I'll work on it.
  • jc
  • ch
  • 8 Aug 2006, 06:56
like the washed-out effect here. seeing you other pics, i would say it comes from using the sharpening tools and the monitor colour profile. I agre with BeakerSt about cropping. Do you have more of these? would be great to see them.
Shanti: i wish i understood the lingo... sharpening tools? i don't think i did anything like that. so far my edits are limited to crop, auto-balance, a bit of light adjustment, oh and yeah, solarize. but as i said before... just wait til i get PS.

i started to crop this again, but can't bring myself to cut off the roof windows. i was thinking if i had better softward, i'd select the triangle of trees and fade them way out.

maybe i'll go stand on that bridge again and frame the shot better!

thank you, jc!
  • urbanknit
  • Great Britain (UK)
  • 9 Aug 2006, 19:44
great textures..i'm an architect by day (superhero by night) so i really do appreciate there is something very intriguing about industrial buildings. i particulary like old railways and viaducts
Shanti: thanks urbanknit... you know textures! yeh, i like the cityscapes too. my artist friend here has been encouraging me to go out and shoot, and i begin to really see things in this city that i hadn't noticed. we had a nice day on Hardbrücke, and i fell in love with the rail lines, buildings, graffiti, etc. hopefully can post more of those in future. thanks for viewing and commenting!
  • jc
  • ch
  • 10 Aug 2006, 17:06
hi there, try rotating the pic 6-10 degrees to the left, making the rear part of the windows coincide with the pic's top edge. then, crop again... if it doesn't work, i guess the train station will be there waiting for you.

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